Is this a good start for a novel?

The storyline is decent, but there are many grammatical errors (commas, runons, misspellings, etc.). Try rereading it to fix those. Also, try to think of a few beginning lines that could better draw the reader in. Another thing is the tense in chapter 1. You started off in present tense and then changed to past tense. You should pick one or the other and just stick to it. Some of your sentences could be improved by adding more descriptive verbs and nouns.