How's this for a poem?

i pray to god that you did not write this poem from personal experience because it would be devistating to loose a child but this poem is beautiful and it can really chanllenge your emotions at first i felt nothing but sadness but then as i read on i felt complete anger inside and then finishing the poem i had no emotions to what i was reading i guess i could not feel them anyomore because there is to true emotion that will fully explain what it was that i felt but then i can just say that i just felt.:(